Extreme Brevity « Whispers In The Wind

Extreme Brevity

November 14, 2007 by Shirley Allard

Daylight ends
Light escapes
Dusk conceals
Darkness waits
Spiders weave
Moons appear
Life evolves
And disappears.

Posted in Poetry | Tagged Poetry, brevity | 4 Comments

on November 14, 2007 at 6:45 pm1 Bob

Once again, you’ve proved your ability to reduce all things to their lowest common denominator. Clear, concise and hard-hitting, I cannot help but wonder how long it will be before we, too, evolve to the point where we can no longer surv–
on November 14, 2007 at 7:30 pm2 Shirley Allard

Well, in some aspects it will probably be sooner than we would like.
Some things are just not meant to last forever I guess. Thanks!
on November 14, 2007 at 11:05 pm3 jojanoski

Whoa! The abbreviated version of the history of the world! BTW, have you seen Bob? Can’t find him around here anywhere. lol.
on November 15, 2007 at 8:58 am4 Shirley Allard

Thanks Jo…Bob? He seems to have disappeared rather suddenly…hmmmm.