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So tough on the outside
the best of defenses
well hidden are men
who construct well
their fences.
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30 Monday Jun 2008
Posted in Poetry
30 Monday Jun 2008
Posted in Poetry
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So tough on the outside
the best of defenses
well hidden are men
who construct well
their fences.
Whispers In The Wind 
It’s accurate, at least for me. It also resonates. My relationships have started and ended at the fence. Many do not understand , it takes a bit of time before one can find the gate. I enjoyed your poem. Please visit me… Emilio
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ouch. so true… of us all
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I couldn’t agree more Oz. We tend to fence ourselves in thinking we’re keeping others out!
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fences, walls, barriers
all are facades
none keep the rain out
all are misnomers
we present them as defences
they are
though
prisons.
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Hey Guys, me thinks thou doth protest too much…or something! I recently read Charles Bukowski’s “Bluebird” and this is what I got from it. No personal attacks on the male species intended. 🙂 However, I think you nailed it Dan!
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Like Bob I must disagree, but can provide no substantiation for my position. Are you suggesting men are like M&M’s, the hard outer shell is essential to keep the gooey chocolate from getting everywhere?? Sorry, my stomach is growling this morning.
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I couldn’t disagree more vehemently! (I’d love to stick around and comment further, but I just discovered a hole in my fence that I need to go repair…) 🙂
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